User:FossilLord
This is one of the more interesting urban fantasy stories I have read. I know I am spoiled by good writing like the inimitable China Melville and J.K. Rowling; good writing and worldbuilding speaks for itself. I am not sure I will be able to be as serious here as on worm but I will give it the old collage try. Attwell Family
Now where did put it
ef>With my newly acquired second sight, I could make out the spirits that infused everything. Just as I might focus my eyes, I could focus this sight. I could train it. According to Essentials, some practitioners would train their sight to focus on things better suited to their talents. Imagery would take hold. - Damages 2.1</ref>
Make another category for natural others to differentiate things a bit
Remember to collect the Pact WoG Vestige suff
Pact Art Work
This looks like a job for the High Priestess of Cloacina
Ogre Practioner
Change ==History== sections into ==Chronology==
Invisible stuff <ref> - FINDERS, document by Wildbow.</ref> cool stiff
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